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One day, I'll be strong enough that I won't consider myself a weakling.
Until then, I'll just grin and laugh it off.

One day, I'll be wise enough that I won't consider myself a fool.
Until then, I'll be silent and learn.

One day, I'll be brave enough that I won't consider myself a coward.
Until then, I'll aid the ones who protect me.

One day, I'll be mature enough that I won't consider myself a child.
Until then, I'll find someone to look up to.

One day, I'll have enough love that I won't be filled with hatred.
Until then, I'll forgive and try to understand.

One day, my heart will be filled with light.
Until then, I'll fight the darkness within.
Just something I thought up while I was thinking about all my flaws. There's a lot in me I need to improve... God put me on this planet to do a job, and I need to be good enough to do it.
So, I thought up this poem about what I plan to do within myself. I normally hate poetry without strict rhyme and rythm, but... I just felt like writing this.
I called it Paladin's Oath because, well, I'm trying to become one who fights for the light.

I dunno if it's good, I don't normally write things like this.
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slith3r3nbank Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is very beautiful. I hope you continue to bring the fight to the darkness as you learn, love and protect. I wish you the best.
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Realmotta Featured By Owner 8 hours ago  Student Writer
Super late reply, I know, I apologize. But thank you. = ) I'm...still trying.
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xDMInfernoGR Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
I don't know about the rest, but the second paragraph i believe you already fulfilled with your words.
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Realmotta Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Writer
Perhaps. = )
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TheLightGuardian Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010   Writer
I like this very much cuz it rocks that way
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Realmotta Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. ^^
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